Comments on: The Den of Thieves (II) http://lucidwaking.net/blog/2008/03/26/the-den-of-thieves-ii/ The arts of BNielsen Tue, 22 May 2012 10:31:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Lucid Waking » Archive » The Den of Thieves (IV) http://lucidwaking.net/blog/2008/03/26/the-den-of-thieves-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-1758 Lucid Waking » Archive » The Den of Thieves (IV) Fri, 27 Jun 2008 01:35:02 +0000 http://lucidwaking.net/Blog to /2008/03/26/the-den-of-thieves-ii/#comment-1758 [...] Parts: Part 1, Part 2, Part [...] [...] Parts: Part 1, Part 2, Part [...]

]]> By: Tannish http://lucidwaking.net/blog/2008/03/26/the-den-of-thieves-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-1182 Tannish Mon, 31 Mar 2008 20:54:28 +0000 http://lucidwaking.net/Blog to /2008/03/26/the-den-of-thieves-ii/#comment-1182 This is your best yet, IMHO. You've established a whole mileau in a short space and peopled it with mysterious yet believable characters. It has forward momentum already. You leave the reader wanting to know more. This story has legs - its going places. Good job. Tannish This is your best yet, IMHO. You’ve established a whole mileau in a short space and peopled it with mysterious yet believable characters. It has forward momentum already. You leave the reader wanting to know more.

This story has legs - its going places.

Good job.
Tannish

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