Comments on: Weekend Days http://lucidwaking.net/blog/2006/06/18/weekend-days/ The arts of BNielsen Mon, 21 May 2012 00:08:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Annie http://lucidwaking.net/blog/2006/06/18/weekend-days/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Annie Fri, 23 Jun 2006 00:46:06 +0000 http://lucidwaking.net/archives/3#comment-3 Okay, you wanted deep comments so here we go, I like the overall feel of the poem, but I don\'t get the last two lines. The whole fragmented representational feel is cool and the middle is really strong. I think you can do better though (please don\'t eat me) and as always take my advise with suspicion because what the hell do I know, you\'re the author. Okay, you wanted deep comments so here we go,

I like the overall feel of the poem, but I don\’t get the last two lines. The whole fragmented representational feel is cool and the middle is really strong. I think you can do better though (please don\’t eat me) and as always take my advise with suspicion because what the hell do I know, you\’re the author.

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